Eternal sky charts
Extending beyond midnight
Drooping willows cringe
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http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.in/2013/08/carpe-diem-284-endless-skies.html
Eternal sky charts
Extending beyond midnight
Drooping willows cringe
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http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.in/2013/08/carpe-diem-284-endless-skies.html
Peach oleander... 
Powerful last line, Panchali. I always love it when the weeping willow is used in poetry. It is so evocative and can be interpreted variously. 🙂
Thanks for that motivating comment, my friend. I agree, ‘weeping willows’ add a subtle flavor to a poetry; and I added ‘drooping’ instead of ‘weeping’ -you must have noticed 😀
I hope this was appropriate for this prompt , carpe dime.
Thanks for coming by with your precious comment. 🙂
I like the way how you have used our prompt in this haiku Panchali, it’s in a way different with the other contributors …
I hope this was appropriate for this prompt , carpe dime.
Thanks for coming by with your precious comment. 🙂
Your last line raises many questions…cringe, for me, goes with fear. Evocative haiku.
Poor earthbound willow…
I loved the last line … truly powerful 🙂