deep into abyss
nothing exists or remains
i fear my shadow
~
miles and miles of dunes
flowing in parallel lines
melodic whisper
~
waves of illusion
wriggling fugaciously
few moments of life
~
toes wobbling gaily
in undulating ridges
people love to click
~
silhouettes emerge
kaleidoscopically
the sun dips behind
~
Written for PU’s Prompt : A grain of Sand….. http://poetryblogroll.blogspot.in/2017/04/poets-united-midweek-motif-grain-of-sand.html
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Oh, you write so beautifully, my friend.
I like the second one very much, but the first one is my favourite! Wow! ❤
Thanks so much, my friend❤…Annie!
Hugs, Panchali. I hope to get more notifications of your beautiful work.
Awww… You are welcome whenever you get time… I love to see you here always… :)))) Many thanks,,,,
Especially love the first one!
Thanks Rajni…glad you enjoyed reading! Grateful…
What a beautiful set of haiku full of the spirit of the desert.
Thanks for reading and for your words of encouragement, Robin! It means a lot to me…🙂
I was trying to decipher which one would be my pick…I gave up after a while 🙂
Coming from you, that’s a huge compliment, Alok. Thanks a ton🙂
Pleasure, ma’am 😊
Thank you so much for coming back, Alok… :)))
These are all so beautiful. I love the second one most, the thought of a melodic whisper is so unique.
Thanks for coming by and for the appreciation, Myrna… :)))
A lovely set of haiku accompanied by exotic pictures. I especially like the waves of illusion. Nice imagery 🙂
I am glad you liked the Haiku…That’s my favorite one too!! Am glad someone mentioned about the ‘waves of illusion’…Elated!! Thanks so much!
The second one for me. The parrellel lines and the melodic whisper of the deseft.
Thank you, Rall. Glad you came by… :)))
What a wonderful collection of haiku, and the stunning images make the pieces much more enjoyable!
I am glad you liked, Khaya… thanks for the appreciation. :))
Such a gorgeous collection of haiku, Panchali 😀 especially love; “silhouettes emerge kaleidoscopically the sun dips behind.”
Many thanks, Sanaa for the appreciation!! Thanks for reading….. 🙂
That’s a great collection of desert haiku 🙂
Specially liked the first and last….the last haiku for its poetic essence and the first one for it is really touching
Welcome on these pages, Vijita! I am SO pleased you liked these…Many thanks!!
Vivid and entrancing.
Thanks Rosemary….. always good to see you here… :))
What a sumptuous haiku serving; i sooooo luv the word ” fugaciously”
much love…
Yes….i liked that word…gave a perfect syllable count too! Many thanks for coming by…Gellina!
Pleasing unison,
Between graphic tones
And worded sounds.
Nice!
Thanks for that inspiring comment, Biswajit! Hope to see you more oftennon these pages!!