blowing wind crumble
the grains of sand, to archive
Lost empires dance
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http://haikuhorizons.wordpress.com/2014/03/23/haiku-horizons-prompt-sand/
blowing wind crumble
the grains of sand, to archive
Lost empires dance
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http://haikuhorizons.wordpress.com/2014/03/23/haiku-horizons-prompt-sand/
Lost empires dance… Slam dunk! Wonderful take on the prompt
Thanks a bunch, unfetteredbs!! Always wonderful to read your comments!! ๐
“lost empires dance”
Thats really lovely imagination!
This is classic my friend ๐
Wow…thanks for the lovely compliment, my friend ๐
๐ Thanks a lot, Satya Rekha….
I like how sand and history connect. I, also, really like the world “empire” as you used it in this poem. Very evocative language. ๐
I like the rich historic feel in you poem. Good one.
That’s a gorgeous haiku Panchali … and that last line is stunning …
Vanishing empires buried by the sand. Reminds me of a poem called Ozymandias which we learnt at school . Good one Panchali !
nice to see you after so long Panchalidi…love the blend of history and geography..
ah lovely !
Gorgeous as always.Pl. try to visit me at times though not commendable.
Loved the way you have described how nothing is permanent, yet nothing is fully lost. Feels ethereal reading about dance of lost empires Panchaliji.
Last line – Superb ๐