Soaking, progressing, intensifying
Isolated, elusive, transitional, solemn
Revealing, self-delighting, radiating
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**Just tried my hands at writing a Diamante Poem ….
How I wish this was the circle every day..
From day to night and noght to day..;)
Oh, how I wish….!!….Life is never smooth sailing…Thank you. I am glad you liked this, Bikram… :)))
Oh Panchali, this is so brilliantly done. 🙂 I like how night transitioned so seamlessly into day. Brave. 🙂
Coming from you, this is a very gratifying compliment, Celestine. Thanks… :)))
Just came back from your page. Wow! Your diamante is simply superb. Thanks for the wonderful treat. 🙂
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I love how this pared down poem creates such a vast picture and concept..when you stop and think the passage between night and day is magical – and not just a physical thing
Thank you for your encouraging words. I appreciate them, Jae:))
NIce Diamanti. What an interesting choice of the turn line there in the middle as well. I guess they each are all those, a little. Really nicely done panchali.
Thank you so much for the compliment. You made my day, X… :))))
Wow!! Such a wonderfully crafted diamante 😀 😀
Thank you, Sanaa….Love seeing you here always! 🙂
How the words you used dawn on the reader. Beautifully done.
Thanks so much for your kind words…am absolutely gratified, Robin 🙂
This is most beautifully done Panchali di..from mysterious to transitional to revealing..what beauty!!
Thanks for the compliments…… it is always a pleasure to read your comments, Sumana. :))))
always luv the diamente form. it’s small but never trifling; have an awesome Sunday
Thank you! I am sooo pleased you liked this. Happy Sunday to you too, Gellina 🙂
I really enjoyed the progression of your diamente, Panchali….how it began in the dark and ended in the light. I much prefer that to its opposite. Smiles.
Thanks for reading it …and for your encouraging comment. You made my day, Mary!! .:))
This breaks like the dawn is breaking.. night might be dark, but at the end dawn will come.
Delighted to have you here with your encouraging feedback..Rudberg! A big thanks….
That transition from night to day was delicious!
Welcome to my space, Magaly! Thanks for your kind visit and comment. Hope to see you more on these pages. Thanks again.
Lovely use of this form. From night to day – flowed so naturally as does night into day in our lives. Beautiful.
Thank you, kanzensakura😊
You took us through that transition beautifully.
Nicely woven Panchali – a little treat for me to read tonight – thank you… With Best Wishes Scott http://www.scotthastie.com
Glad you enjoyed reading, Scotland,. Thank you very much.
I love the carefully chosen words that transition from night to day!
You made my day..Thanks Donna…
concise and pretty. bravo!
Thank you for your kind words, james😊
Well done !
Thank you, ZQ😊
This makes me appreciate the beauty of night and day. Makes me think how we have both within us, darness and light complementing each other. Beautiful poem Panchali.
That’s nature’s drama, myrna..which is absolutely enchanting😊. Thank you so much. Good to see you.
Loved that choice of “soaking, intensifying” a beautiful flow of words
Oh, thanks a lot, tsdwords for dropping by….!
Great poem, I liked your use of the form.
Thanks for raeding, Meisner 🙂
Nice try, creative form, esp. when we use antonym at the end ~ night -day.
Yes, it isn’t easy…but, I enjoyed writing. Thanks for coming by,…Irene 🙂