Fire~

on deserted shores

earth, sky, water are composed

life incinerates

~~

i breathe-let-go-breathe

as slash of dawn cracks open

fiery love of god!

https://haikuhorizons.wordpress.com/2015/04/05/haiku-horizons-prompt-fire/

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24 thoughts on “Fire~

  1. I especially like the last verse… I feel the awakening of a new day, looking upward to that ‘fiery god of love’ and breathing out and breathing in! Nice.

    • A new dawn is uplifting, Gabriella as you have pointed out. It’s amazing how the auras shine ….in perfect equilibrium. πŸ™‚ Thanks so much for your beautiful comment.

  2. Your imagery is so powerful. I love this.
    (The one I got in my email notification was a different version than the one I read here on your blog. I like this one better!)

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