Life Circle~

life completes circle

at the end of the journey

death draws the last line   (Sara McNulty)

clouds cradle the naked souls

 stars lean like flowers of light

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My concluding lines in 7-7 syllables in bold

http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.in/2013/11/carpe-diems-tan-renga-month-v-sara.html

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