Bad cholesterol
Lewdly tease my somber heart
Soul grieves for butter
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On night’s deep-blue sheath
God clasps my hand in His grasp
God’s not just a myth
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http://haiku-heights.blogspot.in/2013/09/haiku-heights-293-september-heights-day.html
I like your use of language in your myth haiku – nice imagery.
“night’s deep-blue sheath” is a beautiful phrase. Thank you!
aww ..the first one is so true for many………..myth haiku is intense…..
Both Haiku are fabulous. God is omnipresent.
Like your range. Nice done. I grieve for butter too ( grin)
Wonderful set, Panchali. The second one is so powerful and inspiring. God is real, my dear.
No myth there in the second one!! When heart is troubled there is always God to hear all the prayers, and He will surely not fail you!!