CANDLE
Let this candle hum
Burn our shackles, bring freedom
Let fire, kindle fire
DRONE
The meteor showers
The drones make the branches creak
Beaver goes pok-pok
Written For http://haiku-heights.blogspot.in/
CANDLE
Let this candle hum
Burn our shackles, bring freedom
Let fire, kindle fire
DRONE
The meteor showers
The drones make the branches creak
Beaver goes pok-pok
Written For http://haiku-heights.blogspot.in/
Peach oleander... 
Readers, This is Panchali from panchalibolchi!!!
Welcome…both are nicely created…you may like to check the syllable count in the second haiku…
RS
Oh! This syllable thingy is the most difficult part…I checked with the haiku-syllable-counter just now and it gave me a green signal again. Can you suggest a reliable counter, please. Thanks Ramesh for being here.
Nice ideas for the prompt and it is better to count the syllables on finger tips than depend on any counter Panchali!! It should be easy after a few tries!! I follow 5-7-5 syllables strictly but there are other forms too which Leo has explained extensively on HH page!! Thanks for your lovely comment on mine and welcome!!
Thank you, Nanka for your suggestion. I am sure, I’ll learn to count the syllables on fingers…soon:)
Thanks for being here.
the first one is just amazing! so positive and inviting! loved it.!
and the second one creates a busy scenery. wonderful! Keep writing!
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Thank you, Jayanth for coming by…hope to see you more often..
Very enjoyable!
Thanks a ton for liking, Veralynne.
5-7-5 not the only rule any longer. I usually only follow new guidelines. Really love first haiku. Liking second one but lack knowledge on beavers to make the connection. Still, lovely nature reference.
Oh, thank you so much, Maggie, for that inspiring comment….You’ve made my day!:) I find syllable counting quite difficult. It will be nice, if we could do away with it: D
Hope to see you more on these pages….:)
Thanks a ton!